Monday 28 May 2012

Words and Music

Music: the most popular facet of the arts, with the possible exception of cinema.  It is also potentially the most commercially viable, the most subjective and at times the most hotly contested.  It is also the most versatile, not only in terms of genre and sub-genre, arrangement, et cetera, but also in terms of context and application, be it as a soundtrack to a movie or television show, advertising jingle (okay, bad example!), or something to listen to during times of labour or recreation, even passion, or indeed while drawing, painting, sculpting or writing.

Naturally, personal tastes vary, ditto the personal significance for each person.  When his schedule allowed, my father liked to sketch, his inspiration fuelled by airs composed by the likes of Tchaikovsky and Vivaldi.  Some writers also swear by classical music, such as Isobelle Carmody and James Ellroy, the latter being a huge fan of Beethoven.  Stephen King, on the other hand, seems to be more eclectic (according to one account I read, he even listened to Eminem!).  Whether it's because classical music tends to be unfettered by words I'm not sure, but if it works, it works.

For me personally, it depends on where I'm at, but it's often as much about getting into the right headspace, the right mindset, feeding the inspiration.  

As much of my fiction has been set in mid-twentieth century America I've sought out music from that era to help immerse myself in that given time.   For example with my first novel Breaking Point I indulged in a fair bit of The Inkspots, Billie Holliday, Ella Fitzgerald, Frank Sinatra and whatever else people might have listened to in New York in 1943-44, while with my current project, which is set predominantly in the South in 1929-34 I've been getting right into a rich and broad pallet of pop, jazz and folk music (including blues and country) from the 1920s and early '30s including artists as diverse as Duke Ellington, Rudy Vallee, Josephine Baker and The Carter Family.  Again, it's part of immersing myself into the era I'm writing about, even picking out a good song to help flesh out and add colour to and even echo the context of a given scene (or even the entire narrative), getting myself into that headspace (though I doubt I'd do it if I didn't enjoy it).

Having said all that, I have written certain stories or even parts while listening to music which may have been totally anachronistic but helped put me in the right headspace.  For example, when writing the crucial murder scene in Breaking Point I was listening to The End by The Doors - a tad anachronistic I know but it fit because let's face it, it's a rather violent song therefore fitting given that I was writing a decidedly violent scene (though I had All Or Nothing At All by Frank Sinatra playing in that particular scene).  I've also gotten a fair bit of mileage out of Johnny Cash's Murder compilation while writing various crime shorts and even longer projects.  Anachronistic or not, if it feels appropriate and helps with the headspace or at least the inspiration it's completely appropriate.

So, to all of you writers and artists out there, what makes up the soundtrack to your creative pursuits?

Thursday 17 May 2012

Sound advice and bonus purple prose


Monday’s workshop with supernatural romance and urban fantasy author Keri Arthur was rather interesting and informative, and she’s a New York Times bestseller so she knows what she’s talking about. 

“First off, write the best damn book you can, put it in the drawer for at least a month, edit it, then if you want to go mainstream get an agent,” she advises.  And preferably an American agent, especially if you want to get published in the U.S.  Well, I think I’ve ticked the first two boxes, and am in the process of doing the third.  Also, I think I may have improved my chances given the American setting of my first novel Breaking Point and the one I’m currently working on.  We were also advised to check out such websites as The Publisher’s Marketplace, Predators and Editors and hipiers.com.  Keri also recommended having a Facebook page and a webpage or fanpage; hmmmm... now to regularly update...  and to write about writing and other stuff besides current projects, give a picture of oneself as an all-round person (and here I was thinking that was what my general purpose blog was for)...  I'm getting there *touch wood*.

Keri cited three major reasons why books get rejected:

1. Lack of a strong opening, or not opening with a hook;

2. Overloading the beginning with background or back story;

3. Rushing to submit a story before it's ready.  "No first draft is perfect.  Good writing is rewriting but don't edit it to death."

As a challenge we were given two pictures to write about, as an opening hook for a hypothetical tale.  We could have chosen either picture but I chose both.  One featured a woman with frightened eyes and the lower half of her face covered by her hands and turtleneck; the other a rather scary-looking fellow with a six-pack contrasted by a painted or tattooed face and hollow black eyes:

“Bewilderment and confusion etched themselves upon every fibre of her being; bewilderment and confusion born of the simultaneous repulsion and animal lust she felt as she gazed upon him, that rippling torso contrasted sharply and jarringly with that hideously painted face and that penetrating stare.  Maybe it wasn’t repulsion she felt, but fear – fear of him, or fear of her own carnal desire as her eyes fell upon him?”

I realise the prose was rather purple, and maybe it did sound a little hammy when read aloud, and I could tell it was nothing special, but we can't win them all, it was just an exercise and with practice and polish these things do improve.  If I ever do develop it it would have to be a comedy – it’s too over-the-top to present as a straight narrative.  Alternatively I could drop the first sentence and simply open with the second…?

Oh well, I wrote a killer hook for Breaking Point; I’ll have to work on one for the novel I’m currently working on though, but that's a given - it is a work in progress after all…

She also said not to diversify at least until established in the literary world.  My short stories have been a mixed bag so far, though they have included ones in a crime/thriller/noir vein, which is the category my bigger projects so far fit into.

And now I direct you to Keri Arthur's fanpage: http://www.keriarthur.com/